Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Reader's Theatre

Look! We have some reader's theatre to watch...Comment in the approved format...PMI.

Well done girls. Our first ever broadcast of a RT...

37 comments:

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: Our vocies are easy to understand and they are clear

Minus: We could have had more actions

Interesting: Some of the actions that we came up with fitted what we were saying

Feedback From: Stacey

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: You gave a lot of information. Well done!!!!!!!!!

Minus: More actions and Stacey's voice could have been louder.

Interesting: The script that you chose

Feedback From: Nicolene

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: Our voices were clear

Minus: We could hav had better facial expresssions

Interesting: we had faces of da ppl we were talkin bout lol :]

Feedback From: Katie R:]

ps. stacey cudnt hav replyed cause it said she replyed ystrday and same 4 nicolene im so confussed dis is stuffed up:s

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: There voices were clear and easy to follow

Minus: could of had less mumbling abit.

Interesting:The actions were cool hah =]

Feedback From: Christina

Anonymous said...

Stacey bet me to the chocolate bar !

Anonymous said...

Group: Sliver Ferns
Group members: Stacey & Katie R
Positives: your voices were very clear and easy to understand to what you were saying
Minus: I think you could have put in more actions & your voices could have been a little bit more louder
Interesting: you chose a good topic
Feed back from Deana

Anonymous said...

group: silver ferns

members stacky and katie

positive: good actions and voice was loud

minus: there was not a very good flow between the seens
feed back from jack

Mr Crowhurst said...

Well done Stacey... KTR the time is set at American time... 21 hours behind NZ... Or three hours ahead and a day behind. Well done to all those people who commented so far.

Mr Crowhurst said...

Oh yeah and make feedback specific please...

Like...

Minus: You could have had more actions. This could be achieved by using actions that last longer than two seconds and can be performed for longer (10-15 seconds) while you are reading. This would keep the interest up.

DON'T JUST SAY POSITIVES AND NEGATIVES. SAY WHY SOMETHING IS POS OR NEG AND HOW IMPROVEMENTS CAN BE MADE.

Shottie

Mr Crowhurst

Anonymous said...

Group Silver ferns
Grroup MEmbers Stacy And Kaite R

Positve Good info. Your voices were clear.

Minus STACEY was hard to hear.

Intresting The Pics and actions

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Anonymous said...

Group:Silver Ferns
Group:stacey and kt :)

+: It was very factual

-:more expression

improv:You could have used more actions

Georgina!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

group:silver ferns
group members:stacy kate

positive:the voice contast

minus:nothing

interesting:face actions

feed back from cammy

Anonymous said...

Group name: Silver Ferns
Group members: KTR and Stacey

Positive: the voices were quite clear even though they were a distance away and had some effective thinking into using faces.

Minus: not much but the usual a little more of the hand actions would be kewl but it was... BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Interesting: like i said in the positive it was a wonderful way to use faces as a thing to tell the viewers who is who and which face matches each name.

Overall a brilliant and superb job done by Stacey and KTR good stuff.

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: i got a great understandin of the artical

Minus:next time they should speek more clearly and a bit slower.

Interesting:i love the cut out heads

Feedback From: Katie G

Great Work

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: I could hear everything they were saying, nice and clear.

Minus: A big louder, but otherwise great!

Interesting: Good info, good reader's theatre! (:

Feedback From: Caitlin.

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: It was an intresting artical and i enjoyed it

Minus: it was hard to understand what they were saying because the were talking to fast

Interesting: ILoved the cut outs

Feedback From: Katiee G

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: It was an intresting artical and i enjoyed it

Minus: it was hard to understand what they were saying because the were talking to fast

Interesting: ILoved the cut outs

Feedback From: Katiee G

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R


positive the voices where loud and clear

minus could have had more actions

Interesting actions cames up when should

ladies man

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: The information that you gave us helped us to understand what it was about.

Minus:Stacey, your voice was really hard to hear.. but otherwise no other complaints.

Interesting: The little puppet Silever Ferns players were really awsome.

Feedback From: Nicolene

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: Very informative sentences and quite funny because the things they held up were funny.

Minus: Maybe a bit more actions, thats it

Interesting: The pictures you held up were interesting.

Zhibin

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver Ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

+: Voices are clear, and props were good

-: Could of had the props closer

Interesting: good topic

Feedback from: Rogan

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver Ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive:There were lots of good information.

Minus: Stacey could have bewen louder by maybe standin a bit closer.

Interesting: The pictures were interesting.

~~Rachael~~

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: the picture of people are cool

Minus: i couldnt hear what stacey was sayin..

Interesting: Your actions were good

Feedback From: Janica

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver Ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: You both had loud voices that were clear.

Minus: You could have more actions and move the pictures up closer because they were bright and you couldn't see them that well.

Interesting: The roller coaster action was quite cool it gave an effect to the sentence.

Well done girls, great job !

Feedback From: Courtney

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: Good Reading nice enthusiasm in your voices

Minus:Next time maybe you could do a bit more actions that went with the words


Interesing: I liked the stick heads that you had made =]

Feedback From: Katie G

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: their voices were easy to hear and understand

Minus: They could have had more pictures of themselves

Interesting: The info

Feedback From: ???
















DK

Anonymous said...

Group: silver ferns
Group members:Stacey and Katie R

Positive:Lots of info>
Minus:Not enuf action>
Interesting:Tha pics>

Keru>

Anonymous said...

Group:Silver Ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: Voices are clear
Negative: Not all the actions fitted with what you were saying

Interesting:Some good actions




Sam

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: voice was loud and good information

Minus: You should have more actions!!!

Interesting: it was interesting

Feedback from: Tony

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: You made the story lines very long and indepth.

Minus: You could have maybe looked at each other when the opposite person was speaking.

Interesting: The faces were odd.

Feedback From: Hannah!!! :) !!!!!

Great!

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver Ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: Clear voices good job

Minus: mumbling a bit

Interesting: it was very interesting

FeedBack from: Elvin

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: Voices were very clear.

Minus: You could have smiled or used some facial expressions!.

Interesting: The information was interesting.

Feedback From: Jade..XOX

Anonymous said...

ohhh dat wud make more sense lol :]
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Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: ur vocies are easy to hear.

Minus: We could have had more actions

Interesting: Some of the actions that they came up with were a bitt off what we were saying.

feedback:IRON RYAN

Anonymous said...

Group: Silver ferns
Group Members: Stacey and Katie R

Positive: your voices were both very clear

Minus: more actions maybe next time for the words

Interesting: the actions were cool
Feedback From: Tiana

Anonymous said...

Stacey and Katie, what a fab job, you spoke clearly and used props and it was informative! Top marks.

Something to work on is 'jazzing' it up with an interesting background

Interesting is to see what effect different camera shots will make.

Anonymous said...

That last comment was from Mr Stevenson